whell...
I'll give you one for the effort, but other than that,
I read that you were not older than 2, but passed the 5th grade, and your voice doesn't seem like that at all
Like I read below, John is a very very very very very common name, by saying john, you can be talking about thousands of people. Using your user name would be best
There was no story at all. Who was Silvio, why were they there, and why did one guy shoot the other
You just cant have the peoples lips flapping like flapping flappers or it will look like a 9 year old made it.
Next time you make an animation, try using something more simple, like maybe even sprites
Really hope you get better, because more than one turd of the week awards is only for the kitty krew, or as I like to call them, The KKK.
Again, Hope you get better!